Monday 27 June 2016

Rugby Clinic


Reflection
I am learning to add detail by writing 2 or more sentences for each idea.  I find it hard to add detail to the same idea and need to practise writing more.

1 comment:

Miss Kim said...

Fabulous writing, William. I like how you are beginning to add more ideas to your writing. Let's work on adding WOW and writing more sentences for each idea.