Thursday, 18 May 2017

A Moment In time

My Reflection

I have been learning to use strategies to add detail to my writing.  I wrote about a moment in time during my holiday.  I used my 5 senses to add detail to my writing.  I need to improve on adding detail.  I got a lot better at using new word.  I found this work easy because its just a moment in time. The best part of this is the photo.
My next step is to make everything better in my work.