Thursday, 18 May 2017
A Moment In time
I have been learning to use strategies to add detail to my writing. I wrote about a moment in time during my holiday. I used my 5 senses to add detail to my writing. I need to improve on adding detail. I got a lot better at using new word. I found this work easy because its just a moment in time. The best part of this is the photo.
My next step is to make everything better in my work.